HDM Haikus

Borganot · Postby **Borganot** » Tue Mar 25, 2003 11:07 pm

Lyra is a girl
Discovers the ruthless plot
Destiny has warped

daemons are not pets
But a manifested soul
Mine just changed its shape

Shivy · Postby **Shivy** » Tue Mar 25, 2003 11:50 pm

nice..

Borganot · Postby **Borganot** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 12:34 am

I was really expecting more of you to be artistic.
Show your poetic skills people!

Tristan · Postby **Tristan** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:39 am

The daemon changes.
From bird to leopard, and back
Trying to settle.

(yeah, okay, that was lame, but haikus ain't my thing... just wanted to answer to call for creativity).

Justine · Postby **Justine** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:43 am

5,7,5 right?

Tristan · Postby **Tristan** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 2:22 am

katinka · Postby **katinka** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 10:20 am

I alot like cheese,
it goes well on toasted bread,
urm, so does lyra?

Borganot · Postby **Borganot** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:03 pm

I think that could be taken really badly

Nix · Postby **Nix** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 4:48 pm

not a haiku but i wrote a song/poem on hdm

Will · Postby **Will** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:22 pm

The only decent poetry rhymes...

Going to the North
Got my dÃƒÆ’Ã‚Â¦mon by my side
Proudly we go forth

Justine · Postby **Justine** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:53 pm

not necessarily. poems that don't rhyme, but still have good rythm are decent too.

Borganot · Postby **Borganot** » Thu Mar 27, 2003 11:18 pm

My "Zen Saying a Day" calender is mad at you Blighty

Daniel · Postby **Daniel** » Fri Mar 28, 2003 12:47 am

translated poetry is different. especially translated Zen poetry.

Isobel · Postby **Isobel** » Fri Mar 28, 2003 2:24 am

Poems don't have to rhyme to be good! But isn't rhyming poetry usually translated so it rhymes in the language it's translated into? Kind of changes the meaning, but I think that's generally how it's done? Translating poetry is not fun.

I can't imagine trying to translate it so it rhymes. Way too hard. :wink:

Will · Postby **Will** » Fri Mar 28, 2003 9:44 pm

Borganot wrote:My "Zen Saying a Day" calender is mad at you Blighty

What does it say, 'Stay away from people who think that poems should rhyme' ?

Justine · Postby **Justine** » Fri Mar 28, 2003 10:37 pm

No, it Says, "Stay away from people with snakes as their dÃƒÆ’Ã‚Â¦mons!"

Borganot · Postby **Borganot** » Sat Mar 29, 2003 4:07 pm

Today's Zen: A rose is a rose is a rose is a rose.

Will · Postby **Will** » Sat Mar 29, 2003 4:12 pm

Ah well, no problem there seeing as I have neither a snake nor a dÃƒÆ’Ã‚Â¦mon.

lostinthought451 · Postby **lostinthought451** » Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:15 pm

here's a haiku:

daemon severing
pain races through my body
now we are apart
okay, that was depressing here's another:

little red fruit tastes
like the sun, moon and stars, all
shining inside me
heehee....

Alice · Postby **Alice** » Wed Apr 16, 2003 11:27 pm

Angels fight the dark;
In a glade of dappled light
Two children grow up.

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