i love how her eyebrows are not straight and perfectly plcuked, and how crystaline her eyes are. i also love how you shaded the nose! and how her head is perhapse bent in sorrow? lovely! she may be a bit bald at the top of her head, or maybe that's just the light on her hair?

I just love the way you draw hair!

sorry, but i dont think this is one of your best pics, what w/ the hair and the shading is weird too. sorry...but i think you've done better.

totally sick

This is definitely one of your best!! keep up the good work..

i like how u weren't afraid to not make her all pretty and thin and beautiful as she is described in the book. Not that i didn't imagine her like that, its just u have shown she can be striking without being the model of good looks. However, her sense and stength of character is still clearly displayed in her determined and grieving face: u can tell she is not one to pity. There are a few small things i don't like about the face- her wonky, blank eyes and giant lips, but apart from that i love the rough shading and texture u applied to the hair and face- even in a quick sketch thwe actual drawing is very effective.

actually, come to think of it, she looks a lot like me!

OH MY GOD! She's beautiful! I LOVE the shading. Superb. I myself, being obsessed with shading, love when I see new techniques! I love it. They eyes are AMAZING, and i love her lips. She's gorgeous,but intelligent, and she looks like she's been through alot. That's perfect, you can tell there is a deep person behind the beauty!

but she is pretty and thin

She looks a bit like an angry child... But it is OK.