wow this is really cool! Very lyraish indeed. I like how you've got her hair blowing and that little smirk she has. It's great! The only thing is i think Lyra was ment to have pale blue eyes.

i don't really think it matters about her eyes-the emotion is still there in her face. This is a kind of Lyra ya don't c 2 much of-carefree and in love, and i like how her breezy hair emphasizes this. She looks gone with the wind and you really captured her youth and the bliss she feels by bein' with Will. Lovely picture- the hair is the perfect colour and although simple, this drawing contains strong emotions that made me smile :)

WOOOOOOOOOOOW

I thibk it's good too. she look happy and I kind of like the way her eyes is a contrast to the hair ..