it's good. lyra's hair is a little too blond, but pan is really cute (although a little small)

omg das so wiked rae!!!!!!!!!!!!

crap i neva knew u were such a good drawer aye!! c u 2moro

thanks sianny bootiful! =D yep cu2mozza!

Yeah sorry about pan being to small .. im not that great at drawing mice! I dont like colouring in very darkly, so you cant see the colour that well .. stupid scanner! But it looks alot better in real life! Oh well this is only my first .. ill be making more art & ill be sending it in!

KOOOOOOOL

OMG!!
that iz awsum!! u betta make sum mor!!
cyaz luv
Ash

hay fankz smashy!

cool rachel!

It's good,though she's a bit too blond. And to me,she looks like Alice in Wonderland(love Alice though). I imagined Lyra not that sweet. But draw more,you can see you're good in what you do!

I like it!!!! a bit light and Pan's too small, but u have a lovely fine way of drawing, and she looks very suprised. Very neat, and i like the swooshing way u drew the hair! I love the simple, cute little sketch, and hope to see more of ya drawings in the future!

yeah as i said that i dont colour that strongly .. I kinda thought she looked very "sweet" because probaly this would be her at Mrs Coulter's!

holy hell !!

dude this is like prO to tha max!

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Oh, I'm sorry. Yes,then it would be perfect. I'm sorry,again. And for some reason, I dunno ,the look in her eyes makes me a bit sad.

yeah, she looks waiflike and weak- probably because of her captivity with Mrs Coulter- well done(again)!