very good. the only thing i would say is that her pose looks a little awkward. i dont know wht, but she just doesn't look very natural

i mean "why", not "wht"

i think its coz her hand is bent at an awkward angle bb. Apart from that though, this is very much the glamorous, darkly seductive lady i imagined as Mrs Coulter. The outfit seems perfect 4 her, and everything from the suggestive eyes to the ciggarette holder is just right 4 this elegant little drawing. Good job: i love ur fine, minimalistic lineart pieces the best ;)

I know. I had so much trouble with the pose of her hand,and after a long time of trying to get it right,I hadn't got the patience to make it right anymore,so I left it this way.

very good well done! not as i imagined her, but well done all the same! the shading could be darker i think. nice

WOW thats really good!

A very well done drawing, but the only way the viewer knows this is Marisa Coulter is by looking at the title. A better way would be to include her golden monkey daemon.

Good point! I completely forgot the monkey!