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A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Drumroll... Part Four!

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Re: A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Now Part Two.

Postby LadyHawke » Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:46 pm

Wow, dis is DA BOMB, Peter. :love: You're writing this? Ubber awesome!

Please don't stop, Im immersed, I need closure here.....
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Re: A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Now Part Two.

Postby Peter » Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:06 pm

Please don't stop, Im immersed, I need closure here.....
I think this one is going to turn out to be about the same length as the previous Johanna Chen story, A Child of Glory, so you won't get any closure just yet :lol:

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Re: A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Now Part Two.

Postby LadyHawke » Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:09 pm

Arrgh!!! Ah well, at least I won't hafta weep when it ends, like I have my other faves...... I suppose unrequited closure is better than the grief of a series comin to an end.
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Re: A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Now Part Two.

Postby zemarl » Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:31 pm

ooer, backstory!
highly intriguing, peter, as always.
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Re: A New Tale of Glory - Never a War. Now Part Three...

Postby Peter » Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:41 pm

So - I've recast the whole story into the present tense. Why? Mostly because I hated the part that was in the pluperfect (where Jo was arguing with the Comrades). But also because A Child of Glory was in the present tense as well and I feel that's the best way to tell Johanna's story.

Anyway, that's the way it's going to be from here on in. :D
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