nice writing. Very strong, but her face is a little strange....like her mouth looks wide open, her nose a bit twisted and the eyes look kinda dead. Howeva, very bold style, and i love the details of the flowers in her hair! Nicely impacting drawing- the flow of the hair looks so natural!

IT's really really great, just next time, you should try to add some shine into the eyes. I know it sounds stupid, but just adding a little white touch up there really makes her seem alive! Otherwise she's great. I LOVE the thing in her hair. You have amazing details! Her lips are also lovely. Great job Charlotte you have talent!

i agree with lizzie, the gub is too open, but flowers are a nice touch.