woah I've just realised his ear is sideways!!! *sigh*Redo ahoy.

it's...good, although he does look kinda old. is he reflecting on his time with Lyra?

ha!-i know someone who has an ear like that! K, scaring myself now......the ear blip definately doesn't take anything away from the pic! As soon as u set your eyes on this pic u're hit by the strength of his personality and his grim determination! This is every bit Will's defiant nature and really shows his fierce and stead fast manner! The nose is a bit turned up at the end, and he has a bit of a flat head and his hair continues down his neck, but who bloody cares-coz it doesn't stop the drawing being Wills spot on! How can u capture people like this?This is so like Will (apart from a few personal preferances) and if a picture instantly hits u as the character (like this one did) then it is bound to be done by a very talented artist who is able to get the feel of the character intimately and convey that meerly through a simple sketch! sorry.......passion attack.......happens quite a lot.....

God-those eyes! u can see why Lyra quailed when Will turned his anger on her and u can also see why Serafina was scared too look Will in the eyes! There certainly is something of Iorek in Wills eyes! That fierocity and natural suspicion.......

You've got the essence of Will, silversong, you just have to work on the style--the ear, the eye positioning. Best one here though, as far as energy goes.

yeah i love it. He looks older so yeah what kittykat said, maybe reminiscing. Nice shading and things.

i like it a lot.
he looks a bit like a greaser, but otherwise, it's deffinately moody and angry.

I agree with Mockingbird, I love your interpretation. Both Will and Lyra are spiritually older than their age, I suppose, and how I imagine them takes that into account. Brilliant :) Romantic too, when you put him into the context of HDM. Much Kudos.

Erm............. Is he wearing lipstick?

very handsome! i like this version of will the best. the ear is fixable however, and over-lookable. very dramtic though. his eyes are piercing. definitley lyra's kind of guy. great job on this one! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)