Lovely lineart: nicely simple, clean and flowing. I like your style, it's refreshing and sketchy and really quite attractive to look at (?!)
ok, i'm on a love-hype today >3
but seriously, i love how you draw just a couple of lines and suddenly the character's there in front of you...
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great face, but i'm not really sure about the pose or his figure- he looks a bit old .. or maybe you were trying to show how the knife shattering matures him in a way?
I think there needs to be more emotion and tension in him, maybe more rawness- after all, he needs to look emotionally and physically battered by this point, and i think you'e portrayed him maybe a little too dreamy and calm for the turmoil associated with this scene. and maybe work on the shading a bit? it's a little inconsistant.
Eva: on 04/19/2008
Lovely lineart: nicely simple, clean and flowing. I like your style, it's refreshing and sketchy and really quite attractive to look at (?!)
ok, i'm on a love-hype today >3
but seriously, i love how you draw just a couple of lines and suddenly the character's there in front of you...
...
great face, but i'm not really sure about the pose or his figure- he looks a bit old .. or maybe you were trying to show how the knife shattering matures him in a way?
I think there needs to be more emotion and tension in him, maybe more rawness- after all, he needs to look emotionally and physically battered by this point, and i think you'e portrayed him maybe a little too dreamy and calm for the turmoil associated with this scene. and maybe work on the shading a bit? it's a little inconsistant.
great sketch- you have lots of talent! x
Jess: on 04/22/2008