its good but it looks a bit like Aladen from Disney.still like it though!

yeah! i thought that too. i like how u draw overall-but i think that his hairs a little big. i lke how u convey facial features, as well, through suggests of lines, though this isn't exactly how i pictured Will. Great job on the different expressions! u took care getting all the movements on the face 4 each drawin! And u remembered the jutting jaw! The top sketch is the most lke my Will, like he's worrying about his mother, or his many problems in life etc, but he's still determined and strong. Didn't think of Will havind blonde hair, but i think thats just because u didn't colour his hair in - u have a lot of talent!

his hair is a bit 60s but i still think it's great!

hsi eyes give em the heebie jeebies
then again, they did htat in the books, too.... hm....

you need more detail to potray the expression on his face because wills expressions make him.......but you are still a good drawer apart from tht