Wow you've been very busy! I love this one! you rock! I love you! Will looks so pained, and has a faraway look as he remembers Lyra's sweetness. This looks like the play set- with wills hoodie and the fencing around the tree. This contains so much emotion- made me cry!

I think this is one of your best pics!

oh wow! this is so sketchy and awesome!!!

and what silversong said and everything but i really have to go now i'll talk more tommorrow bye x

Yeah-it does look like summat off the play! i think Wills face looks the same from there. Its such a shame that the pic blurred! But maybe the blurriness adds to the whole dreamy, remembering, far away feel of Will. Maybe his burning feelings are blurring the pic? Will looks a lot how i saw him and he looks so lost and sad! Brilliant shading! u should do one of Lyra in the same position! ok, gonna cry now............so forlorn and u can just here the titanic music play!

aw wow this is awesome! keep up the good work!

Good. Will looks sad as he remembers Lyra

s'ok. will looks like a dork

umm its pretty good. i think to make him look more sd tho his head should be bent and his eyebrows slightly frowning. otherwise itsa great drawing