This picture is so good. It has so little lines as well. Did you draw it in pencil and then go over it in pen or did you do it in freehand pen? I wish I could draw in freehand pen. And the Snake is great, but I think you might have got a bit confused with the character. It's Lord Boreal/Sir Charles Latrum that has the snake daemon. Dr Lanselius is the guy that works in Bolvanger I think.... but I'm not quite sure.
But anyways really good work!

lol yeah i drew it in freehand pen, like every other one of my drawings... i sent them in thinking that they wudnt use em and then i just came on for a browse and WAHM there it is lol !
erm i ad a look in the book and dr lanselius ahs a serpent daemon, as vividly green as his own eyes... but that serpent could ahve bin bigger than the puny thing i drew... hmmm.. :P thanks neway .x.x

oh, and by the way, dr lanselius is the witch consul at trollesund, who communicates with serafina pekkala

hmmm, I always pictured him a little plump :). on the audiobooks with Pullman narrating his voice is really slimey, and fits the picture perfectly.

HIs hand look rather odd? But otherwise it looks really really good.

yeah the hands rubbish .. sorta.. wrong . completely . i might completely redo this .. hmmm x

don't worry about the hand... your not the only one who has trouble with hands...