me likes pan, and lyra's features are good, but her pose, as if she's sticking her neck foreward, doesnt remind me of remembering something. her hair is also a little thin, but bah.

not very dramatic, and lyra doesn't look to me as if shes remebering summthing. her hair is see through too . Pan looks .......well........mutated, but overall nice try :)

nice effort

sorry, but i really don't like this. Lyra looks like her hair is falling out, and her neck and chin are superbly strange. Also, Pan's peculiarly blank eyes creep me out. all in all, a rather odd drawing, but keep doing it, i see promise. bettr luck next time!

it looks really kool i mean the angle and evry thing
the only part that i dont like is i think that lyra needs more hair

Her is like Gollum's hair from The Lord of The Ring .. otherwise very good..

Lyra's face is very good, but it looks a bit as though she is watching a movie, not remembering. Or perhaps she is just caught up in such a powerful reverie that she is spacing. I find myself doing that alot...ahehe. Anyway, It's very good and a good start on Pan, perhaps but a bit of shine in the eyes. And, yes, a bit more strands of hair. But, again, the face is quite good.

Sorry but i think Lyra looks a bit like Golem from lord of the rings!