lyra's head is too big for her body and there is no depth to pan; he just looks like a simple butterfly and insignifigant. i don't know about anyone else, but i think there should be something special or something about a daemon. especially lyra's.
on the bright side, i do like lyra's hair; it's the closest i've seen on fanart to the picture i imagined in my mind of her. it goes well with her face and the shape of her head, too.
bb: on 01/07/2007
like the title implies, this is ONLY a sketch. it took me about 5 minutes.
Lizzietiffon01: on 01/07/2007
nicely simple sketch- i like her eyes.
glittercloud: on 01/08/2007
yeah the eyes are good. I can only draw faces straight on so yeah. The body is good. You've got all the joints in the right places and stuff. Yes try to work on preportion if you can.
bb: on 01/08/2007
i do have a problem with making the heads too big in all my pics. i dont know why, but i need to work on it.
peter: on 01/06/2007
on the bright side, i do like lyra's hair; it's the closest i've seen on fanart to the picture i imagined in my mind of her. it goes well with her face and the shape of her head, too.
bb: on 01/07/2007
Lizzietiffon01: on 01/07/2007
glittercloud: on 01/08/2007
bb: on 01/08/2007