not bad... im not too sure about Lyra, i like her eyes though and she looks really mature. i like the way pan is drawn and he looks really peaceful and cute :)

Wow! (i like putting that in front of my comments) This drawing is really........strong! It really shows her strength of character and determination. And there's an unmistakable Lyratic glint in Lyras eye! This is an excellant portrayal of Lyras character! I pictured her hair just like that, parted then falling behind her back,dark blonde. I think her face shows exactly the right expression, but i think its too wide and i think her nose should be more pointed and lips not so big, but appearence is nothing to expressions! You are soooooo good at drawing people! Lyra is shaded so beautifully her face looks really real! The hand is brilliantly drawn! Pan looks sooo cute! Is he an Ermine? You're unnaturally good at drawing animals as well and getting tones shaded using pencil! *claps*

Lyra looks really curious and this feeling is expressed in Pans face too(dunno how u did it )BRILL

ummm??? its good...but... well... she looks a little...big boned...

i love the expression on her face! pan is also really good! well done!

I've just realised how good this actually is! sorry. You're very confident like, how you do the shading darker and the light bits lighter. That's good. I've just looked at mine and seen how unlifelike and boring they are compared to yours. (sorry to be so slef-disciplined.) You're really good at drawing! dont give it up!

(mine are the ones...after yours, before yours and the one before the one where lyra is in the dining hall and the one where she's in a big coat and looking a little scared with a mouse on her shoulders)

I think yours are really gd glittercloud

the shaping of the fingers is lovely, very elegant-looking. the eyes are beautiful and the shading's good, but the overall way lyra's drawn here, looks nothing like the sporty, spunky, mischevious little runt we all know and love.

Yeah! The fingers are great! But i have 2 agree wiv Zippy- i think that Lyra looks......too big. Her heads too wide (i think) and lips too big. i imagined her more thin lively (dunno how u could have made her lively) and messy and wild. But i find the picture is really like Lyras character, the way she stares insolently at people, not when shes wild. I think this could be a perfect portrayal of her when older- when she has settled down a bit and isn't so wild-in that she climbs over rooftops and has messy hair-but is still wild in character and desires.

ooooo.........going deep into psychology we are!

Has anyone else been desperatly awaiting their artwork to b put on the site????????? Coz i put stuff on ages ago an it hasn't cum on.............

very lyratic but i fink she should be more skinny. pan luks gr8!

pan is good but I'm sorry i really don't like lyra!!!!! :O

Lizzietiffon01, that happened to me so i sent them again and then they came on quite soon after

he he i've got this scary french music on, like wailing ghosts and i was looking at this lyra thinking "ahhhh" but anyway this is good. I dont think she looks that fat. I just dont like her ears. Too high up

lyra looks.... unlyra-ish.
What am i saying? everybody has a different oppinion. neva mind.
Pan is great. he looks so cute, even for a ferret.

Ermine Pan is adorable! Lyra is a bit off.....Love your art!
Keep reaching the stars! :)