oo nice and colourful! i like to see some coloured pieces- it's boring if everyone does sketches
first of all, i luv ur wonderfly original style- really messy and scribbly but great at portraying the sense of character :D
i'd love to see you do a really finnished and professional piece to see if u can do that on a big, emotional, serious scale as well- that'd be brilliant.
ugh maybe i'm just weird.....
nice scetch and use of felt tips -i esspecially love the cat Pan! lol it looks like she's been caught in trouble and makes out all innocent
i'm not too sure about the background tho- it brings the focus off Lyra and makes the drawing seem a bit too messy and crowded and saturated when it shouldn't be. Were u trying 2 make it like dust?
anyway, brill sketch :)

thanks. hah yeah but felt tips aren't too good at that. yeah i have done a serious piece, but i'll send it in when i can (i'm at school, internets not working at home)
thanks for the comment :]