yeah first to comment
but anyway i really dont like this sry
fist of all pan isnt that small
and also the alethiometer is to small and doesnt go around lyras neck
and sry but lyra doesnt look that good either
so sry to burst you bubble

ditto

i think it's great! i luv the sorrowful look u captured in her eyes, and the way they r far away and hooded, thinking of will. her hair flowing in the wind also helps set the scene for this sad and soft little drawing. pan't really sweet- it looks like he's whispering to her.

r the branches in the background off the tree in the botanical garden, and is lyra on the bench?

brilliant- u conveyed the grief filled moment very well indeed :)

sorry, but this doesn't remind me of lyra, and, as i'm not an author like the person above, i won't say anymore.