u're very talented at drawing Lyra and showing her emotions in her facial expressions, and this is no exception! Even though her face isn't quite the right shape and her lips are HUGE, u have still done a gr8 job on portraying her torment, toughness and sheer determination. The shadows under her eyes add to the feeling that she has already seen too much, but will keep on regardless.Wow- i love her hair- it must have taken ages to create the different strands and the thick texture. Her body is a strange shape though, but i like the rough readiness of her furs.
And how cute is Pan? i like how he and Lyra hold the same expression.

I love how u've done the northern lights trailing off into the distance, but the whole blueness of the sky doesn't really go with the pic, it makes it look a bit odd and blots out the northern lights. would look better a darker blue/ navy. Still, very effective colouring ;P

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sorry but the shape of lyra's head really bugs me. i do like pan though

Yeah sorry. I am aware that lyra's head is too long but surely the idea and the way the picture is portrayed should be commented apon rather than the shape of her head? In repliance to Lizzietiffon01, Thanks so much for all of your comments. btw lyras furs are a strange shape because they are meant to be blowing in the arctic winds. and sorry about the northern lights. I did them with chalks and i smudged to much of the blue.

like it. very nice. better than the other one by u

Thanks A./erica the beautfuk, I think..

yeah- sorry bout my spelling.,
i wasn't looking. That was a complement. sorry..

Cool !!!! She looks ready to fight !!!

Love it! :3

Not perfect, more like milk, but not quite a milkshake, y'know what I mean?