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'Marina' and 'Jopari's Choice' fanfics

Postby rwallace » Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:49 am

I don't see any current contact info or reviews link on the fanfic page, so I'll put this here. (If anyone does have contact info, please forward, I imagine the authors could use the encouragement.)

These stories are good. Flawed, yes, but the flaws could be fixed. The important thing is: they're not just knockoffs. The authors brought their own contributions to the table, put their own souls into the story. Beautifully done, and recommended.
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Postby Peter » Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:06 pm

Jopari's Choice is mine. Thanks for the encouragement.

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Postby Enitharmon » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:05 pm

No comments on The Cassington Scholar or These Foolish Things then?

I'm hurt :x

Hint: Nobody has written a comment on these in oveer two yaers now!
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Postby zemarl » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:16 pm

*huggles rosie* but i LOVE your work! i just don't know how to make a constructive criticism kind of comment, other than brilliant
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Postby Enitharmon » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:18 pm

zemarl wrote:*huggles rosie* but i LOVE your work! i just don't know how to make a constructive criticism kind of comment, other than brilliant


:cute: :cute: :cute: :cute: :cute: :cute: :cute:

Zem, you have such exquisite taste!
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Postby zemarl » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:21 pm

...and that means we BOTH win! huzzah!
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Postby Peter » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:21 pm

*Ceres retreats, outnumbered and unhuggled*
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Postby zemarl » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:23 pm

oh stop it pete, i've praised your writing through the roof already, have i not? *huggles anyway* i wish i could write...
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Postby Enitharmon » Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:24 pm

{{{{{{{{{{PETER}}}}}}}}}

:cute: :cute: :cute: :cute:
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Postby rwallace » Thu Nov 03, 2005 11:22 pm

Enitharmon wrote:No comments on The Cassington Scholar or These Foolish Things then?

I'm hurt :x

Hint: Nobody has written a comment on these in oveer two yaers now!


Well, here's one; I liked them! :)

They're not directly comparable to the ones I mentioned, because they're a different sort of thing - wrapups of threads rather than new stories. But what they do, they do very well. Nicely written!
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Postby Dante » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:01 am

So, which would you say is overall better? :twisted:
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Postby Peter » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:07 am

Dante wrote:So, which would you say is overall better? :twisted:


Are you ready for a whole new world of pain?
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Postby Dante » Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:09 am

Bring it.
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Postby Wharfedale » Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:10 pm

I'm planning to do a HDM fanfic once I finish my current two (I'm BrooklynRed), no ida for a plot at the moment, I've had an idea or two and written a introduction but not much else.
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