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HDM Haikus
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 11:07 pm
by Borganot
Lyra is a girl
Discovers the ruthless plot
Destiny has warped
daemons are not pets
But a manifested soul
Mine just changed its shape
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 11:50 pm
by Shivy
nice..
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 12:34 am
by Borganot
I was really expecting more of you to be artistic.
Show your poetic skills people!
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:39 am
by Tristan
The daemon changes.
From bird to leopard, and back
Trying to settle.
(yeah, okay, that was lame, but haikus ain't my thing... just wanted to answer to call for creativity).
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:43 am
by Justine
5,7,5 right?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 2:22 am
by Tristan
yep
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 10:20 am
by katinka
I alot like cheese,
it goes well on toasted bread,
urm, so does lyra?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 1:03 pm
by Borganot
I think that could be taken really badly
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 4:48 pm
by Nix
not a haiku but i wrote a song/poem on hdm
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:22 pm
by Will
The only decent poetry rhymes...
Going to the North
Got my dæmon by my side
Proudly we go forth
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 9:53 pm
by Justine
not necessarily. poems that don't rhyme, but still have good rythm are decent too.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 11:18 pm
by Borganot
My "Zen Saying a Day" calender is mad at you Blighty
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 12:47 am
by Daniel
translated poetry is different. especially translated Zen poetry.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 2:24 am
by Isobel
Poems don't have to rhyme to be good! But isn't rhyming poetry usually translated so it rhymes in the language it's translated into? Kind of changes the meaning, but I think that's generally how it's done? Translating poetry is not fun.
I can't imagine trying to translate it so it rhymes. Way too hard.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 9:44 pm
by Will
Borganot wrote:My "Zen Saying a Day" calender is mad at you Blighty
What does it say, 'Stay away from people who think that poems should rhyme' ?
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 10:37 pm
by Justine
No, it Says, "Stay away from people with snakes as their dæmons!"
PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2003 4:07 pm
by Borganot
Today's Zen: A rose is a rose is a rose is a rose.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2003 4:12 pm
by Will
Ah well, no problem there seeing as I have neither a snake nor a dæmon.
575
PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2003 9:15 pm
by lostinthought451
here's a haiku:
daemon severing
pain races through my body
now we are apart
okay, that was depressing here's another:
little red fruit tastes
like the sun, moon and stars, all
shining inside me
heehee....
PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2003 11:27 pm
by Alice
Angels fight the dark;
In a glade of dappled light
Two children grow up.